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WANING MOON Excerpt

PJ Sharon here. Welcome to another installment of August Excerpts here at YA Beyond. Today I’d like to share an excerpt from my upcoming release, WANING MOON, Book One in THE CHRONICLES OF LILY CARMICHAEL trilogy. Since the book won’t be available until the end of September, I thought I would give one lucky commenter a goodie bag, including a very cool bit of WANING MOON swag. Just leave a comment below and “like” our FB Page. You have until next Thursday at midnight to enter. Last week’s winner of a signed copy of SAVAGE CINDERELLA was Stacey Joy Netzel. Congratulations, Stacey!

 

Here’s an excerpt from WANING MOON:

Will looked at the sun sinking behind the trees. “Shouldn’t your brother be back by now?”

I hadn’t noticed how much time had passed but he was right. Zeph was late and an uneasy flash of anger rose inside me. “He’s probably down at the pond fishing or sitting on some log whittling another flute or something.” As much as I loved Zeph’s talent for wood carving, it wouldn’t be the first time he’d forgotten his chores and flaked out about the time.

I wiped sweat from my face onto the shoulder of my shirt. “I suppose we should go check on him.” We didn’t have time for my brother’s foolishness. Sam would be waiting for us at the McKinley’s and we needed to get there and load up their supplies before dark. An idea struck me and held fast. I knew I shouldn’t even consider it, but we were running out of daylight and I didn’t have time to waste. “Wait here.” 

Five minutes later, the Crawler rumbling beneath me, I pulled up to where Will stood, a look of astonishment on his face and an excited spark in his eye. 

“Hop on. We’ll find Zeph a lot faster this way,” I said. Will climbed onto the back of the machine. “Hold on!” I jerked into motion and Will grabbed me around the waist to keep from toppling off the back. He slid closer and clung to me tightly, sending all kinds of warm fuzzies to my brain. I savored the moment as we wound our way up the trail into the woods.

We rode for about ten blissful minutes, my thoughts ping-ponging between Will’s body pressed against my back and how my brother was in big trouble when I got my hands on him. I passed several empty snare traps set to catch small game, so I knew Zeph had already been by. I veered off toward the pond. There were two pit traps I could check along the way.

The electric motor purred as we skimmed along the forest floor, moving fast enough to create a refreshing breeze. If I wasn’t so annoyed with my brother and worried about getting back, I would have been having the most fun I’d had in a long time. Up ahead, Zeph’s motor bike lay on its side. I pulled up to the pit trap, noticed it had been sprung, and turned off the motor. 

Will and I climbed off the Crawler, both aware of a strained animal cry from inside the pit. When we approached the edge and peered down into the ten foot deep hole, we both froze. Down below, a large antlered buck lay on its side, legs broken and twisted. Zeph knelt beside it with his hands at the animal’s throat. I watched in horror as my brother’s hands lit with a red glow and the life in the eyes of the frightened buck drained to blackness.

I hope you enjoyed this snippet from WANING MOON. Lily’s creepy little brother Zephron gets his own story in the prequel to the trilogy, called SOUL REDEMPTION, which will be part of the WG2E October Anthology. When D.D. Scott put out the call for Anthology short stories, I realized I had to come up with something spooky for the Halloween edition. Zeph’s story fit perfectly. I figured it doesn’t get much scarier than a thirteen-year-old boy with the power to kill with the touch of his hands. I guess you’ll have to wait until October to find out more. Don’t forget to leave a comment below and “Like” our FB page to enter to win a goodie bag of swag.
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Savage Cinderella-Excerpt and Book Trailer!

A few more weeks of August Excerpts and I’ll be back to my Healthy Teen Tips Friday posts. For today, though, I’d love to share a scene from my YA Romantic Suspense,  SAVAGE CINDERELLA. If you want to check out the book trailer, you can watch it here.

EXCERPT:

Cody stalked around Brinn. Her nerves fired and twitched as she followed his every movement. For a man his size, he moved with the grace of a large cat, sure-footed and fluid. He pointed out the vital areas as he circled her. “The eyes, ears, and throat are vulnerable to attack with fingers and open-handed strikes.” He mimed the various hand positions she could use to damage the sensitive targets. He pointed again to the solar plexus and then to the groin, a smile lifting the corners of his mouth. “Of course the quickest way to stun your attacker is to give him something else to think about besides hurting you, such as…breathing.”

Brinn’s face flushed and she couldn’t help but smile a little, despite the electricity that thrummed through her body. “You don’t want me to hit you there, do you?”

“I’m pretty good at defending my vital organs, but let’s focus on body shots for now.” He motioned with his hands to indicate the target zone was from shoulders to hips. “Just remember, a man has two natural fears during combat—blindness and castration.” He grinned down at her and then stopped circling. Brinn came to stillness as well. “He can’t protect both areas at the same time. But first, you have to get close enough to do some damage.”

He took another step toward her and Brinn instinctively backed up. She realized all at once that other than her father and Justin, and maybe Mr. Hoffman on occasions of necessity, no man had actually touched her since…her heart began to race as Cody took another step closer. She matched his distance by stepping back again. 

“Stop retreating, Brinn. You have nowhere to go.” His voice was deep and resonated around her, his features sharp with concentration. Brinn felt panic rise in her chest. Her breath grew shallow. Sweat tickled her brow and she suddenly imagined another face and body stalking her. She shook the picture from her mind, focusing instead on Cody’s familiar features. 

“I can’t hit you, Cody. I…I won’t.” Her back hit the wall behind her, knocking the last of her breath from her lungs.

When he placed one huge hand on the wall next to her and trapped her in a corner with a long muscled arm, Brinn almost fainted. Dark spots flashed behind her eyes. The heat of his body radiated against her in the inches between them. Fear seized her limbs. His voice was barely above a deep whisper, the gravelly tone at odds with the handsome face and the lollipop sticking out of the corner of his mouth. 

“Are you ready?” He bit down hard, grinding the candy and tossing the stick into a nearby trash-can.  His cool gaze dropped back to hers. “How would you escape if someone had you trapped like this?”

Brinn fought to think and breathe, but her mind fogged with unwanted images. A tingle crawled along her skin. Escape was her only goal. She bent to duck under his arm, but he was too fast. Cody grabbed her, spun her around, and locked her into the steel circle of his bulky arms. He pinned her hands across her chest, crushing her back against the concrete wall of his body. The breath exploded out of her, replaced by sheer panic.

Cody’s hard body encased her, holding her helpless. Her limbs began to shake with a mixture of fear and rage as she struggled with no effect. His voice whispered softly on her hair, sending shivers along her spine. “Don’t panic. Breathe. Think. React.” Cody said the next words with cold, clear intent, “Or are you too weak to stop me?”

Somewhere deep inside and far away, she knew he wouldn’t hurt her, but every fiber of her being felt the fear and rage of being held against her will, and something inside of her snapped. Giving in to the adrenaline that rushed through her system, Brinn let her instincts take over. 

With the force of a hammer, she raked the edge of her boot down his hard shin-bone and slammed it onto the instep of his foot. Cody grunted but didn’t release her. Blood surged in her ears, a deafening roll of thunder that crashed against her mind and escalated her fear. The hands that restrained her brought a flood of images raging to the surface. Memories rose of hard cold hands that held her down and touched her in places that made her hurt inside. 

She went wild. With both knees bent, she sprang upward. The top of her head met his chin with a shuddering crunch as his teeth collided. A throbbing pain shot through her head. She took advantage of the momentary weakness in the vice-like grip that held her hands, wrenched one arm free, and plowed her elbow into his solar plexus with all of her might. As his massive frame gave way and he lost his breath, she pushed backwards with the full weight of her body. His balance tipped. 

When her opponent crashed to the floor, taking down the table and chairs as he went, Brinn lunged for her knife. The world faded into a hazy, slow motion movie in her mind. Her only clear thought—knife. Before rationality could take hold, Brinn jumped on Cody. She straddled his chest, grabbed the short layer of sandy hair on his head, and drew her blade to his throat. A hiss escaped from between her clenched teeth.  

If you want to see what happens next, leave a comment below, stop by and “like” our FB page,  and you’ll be entered into the contest for a FREE signed copy! The winner of last week’s giveaway was Meggan Connors. Congratulations, Meggan. You’ll be receiving a signed copy of ON THIN ICE!

See you next week with an excerpt from my upcoming release, WANING MOON. Since the book won’t be available until September 28th, I’ll be giving away some cool WANING MOON swag. I hope you’ll join me.
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ON THIN ICE-Excerpt

This scene is Penny’s big turning point. A moment of decision that we all must face. Unfortunately she chooses for all the wrong reasons and there are consequences far beyond what she can imagine in this moment. Let’s take a look at a snapshot of a teenage girl’s BIG moment!

Here’s a scene from ON THIN ICE:

“Penny. That’s short for Penelope, right?” Carter picked up the conversation.

“Yeah, but nobody ever calls me that unless I’m in trouble. I’m usually just Penny—or Pen to my friends since I like to keep journals.” It seemed strange how I could be so many different people at the same time. I took another swallow and set down the empty bottle, grimacing at the taste of warm beer.

“I like the name Penny. It reminds me of something shiny and new.” His brows had knit together as if he was deep in thought or maybe he was imagining me with Abe Lincoln’s face. It would take some time to learn his facial expressions, but I had the feeling that I could crack the code given the chance. “Penny, Penny, Penny,” he said in a teasing tone. “I like it.”

“I hate it,” I scowled. “Leave it to my mother to nickname me after the lowest denomination of currency.”

He laughed. “It’s not that bad. I was named after a President that was famous for peanut farming.”

We both cracked up and couldn’t stop. I laughed until my sides hurt. When I caught my breath, I spoke without thinking and asked through the boldness of a good buzz, “Do you mind if I sleep over?”

He hesitated, and then smiled. “Absolutely.” His happy grin grew bigger, showing a set of slightly elongated canines.

I returned the sly smile, thinking of vampires and werewolves. A giggle escaped. “Is that absolutely, you mind—or absolutely, I should?”

His face sobered and the smile changed to one of sincerity. “I’d like you to stay. If you want to that is. No pressure.”

My cheeks warmed as he rested a hand on my ankle, his fingers playing along my skin. I’d never thought of an ankle as being a sensitive part of the body, but the way he drew small circles around the bone with his finger tip, and the way he looked at me, made me feel hot from my head to my toes. He sat up and brushed my bangs out of my eyes. “You’re very pretty,” he said when I looked down, trying to escape the heat of his gaze.

“Thank you.” I forced myself to take the compliment and then looked into his eyes to see if he really meant it. What I saw there rocked my world. A large sleeping cat awoke deep inside me, ready to make its escape. My body purred in response to his flushed face and blazing eyes. His fingertips scalded along my cheek. He wanted me. I could see it, feel it—even taste it in the air.

As our lips touched, my heart fluttered madly in my chest. I felt the power of his desire, the confidence of his touch. He wasn’t like any other boy I’d known or kissed. He was gentle and sure, and he knew what he wanted. He laced his fingers into my hair and pulled me closer, his lips parting. His tongue felt soft and warm against mine, not demanding, but giving and taking equally. Beyond the saltiness of potato chips and the shared bitterness of Budweiser, I tasted a unique flavor that was his and only his. I wanted to drink him down until I was drunk with it. I wanted to drown in the sensations and smells, the sounds of our mingling sighs and the feel of his hands on my skin.

I had made out with boys before and been touched in ways that made me cringe at the thought of doing more, but this was different. Carter was different, and I knew I was stepping over a boundary into an unfamiliar and dangerous territory. I’d often wondered what this moment might feel like—that exact moment when I turned from a girl to a woman—the moment when love became something real and more than a fairy tale. It was a feeling I’d almost believed impossible. Waiting for marriage didn’t seem important at that moment. Life is too short. Live every moment to the fullest, Penny. Make it count.

Any thought I had about resisting was a miniature spark at the back of my mind. I hadn’t planned to go all the way with him, even though I’d invited myself to stay the night—I hadn’t planned anything—but I realized I wanted him to want me, to love me, to take me in his arms and make me forget my life, if only for a little while.

What do you think about Penny’e decision to live in the moment in this scene?

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Passing Notes with Sykosa

As a departure from my usual Healthy Teen Tips Friday, beginning today and going through the month of August, I’d like to give you all an opportunity to get to know my characters from my each of my books. Every Friday, I’ll post an excerpt from one of my books, and a chance for some lucky commenter to win a free copy of that book. How cool is that? As for today, I’m taking part in the “Passing Notes with Sykosa” event. It’s kind of a cool contest where the main character from Justin Ordonez’s book SYKOSA (mature YA readers only), passes a note to my main character, Jordie Dunn, from HEAVEN IS FOR HEROES. And then I post Jordie’s response. It’s a fun way to get to know other authors and characters, AND there’s a chance for you to win $50, a paperback copy of Sykosa, or one of eleven free e-books! The entry form is the Rafflecopter at the end of this post.

Sykosa has already written her note to Jordie. Check out what she had to say, go ahead, I’ll wait here: http://sykosa.wordpress.com/2012/07/27/note-passing-event-note-8-sykosa-tags-jordie-from-heaven-is-for-heroes/

Now, here’s Jordie’s note back to Sykosa:

 Hey Sykosa,

Niko told me to write to you to ask for your thoughts on my relationship with Coop—if there is a relationship, that is. He’s so hot and cold, I can’t stand it. I totally get that he has been through more than any nineteen year old, or anyone else for that matter, should ever have to go through. But the thing is, I just want him to acknowledge that he cares…or at least notices me. Sometimes I think he’s watching me, but every time I try to make eye contact, he turns away like he can’t stand to even look at me. I can see he feels guilty about what happened to Levi, and I don’t know how to help him.

When I mentioned it to Niko, she thought you could help. I know you and I don’t run in the same circles since I go to Somerville High and you and Niko are at the Academy, but she’s been a good friend and I trust her judgment. I’ll admit you do give some good advice. Niko thought I needed to sexy up a bit, too. I’ve always been such a tomboy, and let’s face it; living with a retired Brigadier General for a grandfather means anything above the knee is too short according to him. And don’t even get me started on my mom’s taste in clothes. She hasn’t updated her wardrobe in like ten years.

So, you think if I put on a little makeup, wear my hair down, and show a little more skin, Coop will change his mind? I hope you’re right, but I’m not sure he’ll know me if I try to act different. Coop’s pretty smart and not the kind of guy that fools easily. He knows me probably better than anybody, so I think it wouldn’t ring true if I started playing games like dressing up and flirting with other guys. I don’t think I can do that just to make Coop jealous. That’s just not me. And I wouldn’t want to give some poor guy the wrong impression and then have to hurt his feelings.

I want to tell Coop I love him, because I totally do, but I made that mistake once a long time ago and it kind of ruined things for us. Maybe he just wasn’t ready then. I’m trying to be patient, but I think you’re right. He needs to know how I feel and I need to show him rather than just tell him. Wish me luck!

 P.S. I heard about those girls giving you a hard time at school. Try your best to ignore them and don’t take anything they say or do to heart. There will always be mean people in the world just trying to make themselves feel better by putting someone else down. I don’t get it, but that’s just the way some people are. If you ever need to talk, I’m here. 

Jordie

 

You can visit Sykosa’s FaceBook page to see other notes she’s written and all the fun stuff she’s up to: https://www.facebook.com/SykosaNovel

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Teen-ish Teenagers- One

Over the next few weeks, my brain permitting, I’m going to be writing about teenagers. How they think, how they act, how they sound. Not that I’m a complete expert, but I do know a bit, and I have a couple teenagers here in my household who are willing to help me out. Plus I have a 21-year-old editor who constantly tells me how “teenagery” my teenage characters sound to him, so I must be doing something right.

The reason I’m doing this is that lately, especially in “teen romance” stories, I’ve seen a lot of allegedly teenage characters who just plain don’t come across like teenagers. They come across like the adult author putting an adult brain into a teenage body. Some people may like reading that kind of thing, but if you’re writing for teenagers, it’s a good idea to try to have your characters sound like them.

One of the biggest peeves I’ve had with the “teen romances” I’ve read are things like “His kiss displayed his passion for me. Our bodies joined, and I felt as if we were one.” I haven’t seen that exact quote in a book, but I’ve seen things very similar.

I’m not all teens, and neither are my daughters, but we pretty much agree that most teens wouldn’t think like that! When I was a teenager, my thoughts were more along the lines of, “Wow, he’s cute. I wonder what kissing him would be like?” followed, hopefully, by “Wow, he’s kissing me! This is really nice. I hope I’m doing it right!” My 17-year-old daughter says her thoughts run pretty much along the same lines when she kisses her boyfriend.

If you’re writing about teenagers, try to remember what you thought and felt when you were one. If you can’t remember, try finding a teenager–or someone who was recently a teen–and ask them. If you’re writing for adults, there may not be an issue, but if you’re writing for teens and use language like the first example I gave, you may get some eyerolls. Personally, when I read “teen” characters like that, I can’t even finish the book.

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